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SHORT STORY “Bank Loan Guarantor”

Kashmir Pen by Kashmir Pen
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“Sir! Question does not arise ; Perhaps,You don’t know Dhar family. Dhar family  is known for  commitment,  Zabaan or   word  sir  ;  So are Dhar  children.After all ,  Safa Kadal  Dhar family Sir. Great  Pandit Birbal Dhar’s  clan Sir ;Birbal Dhar Sir ,  Who  saved kashmir from ruthless Pathans by inviting Maharaja Ranjit Singh’s forces  to  the valley. Did you get  it Sir ?  Then , Bal Kak Dhar , D.P.Dhar  and many such names Sir.  And Manager Sahib,  Atul  Ji shall complete his  MBA  2007 and the loan shall be cleared  by December  2009 or at the most by June 2010 from his earnings. He will get a good salary  after completing MBA.  Hundred percent campus selection sir,  hundred percent  Said Roop  Krishen .

Roop  Krishen had come to the Bank along with his brother in law seeking an Education loan of 4.30 Lakhs for MBA degree of his nephew Atul Dhar. He had actually been made to accompany Father and son duo by his own sister. He had casually gone to his sister’s house where he came to know about the selection of Atul   in  a Mumbai College. His sister had said :

“Roop Ji, Tomorrow accompany  your brother in law and Atul   to the bank please. Some loan  issue is to be discussed. Atul may be needing  Education Loan.You have to do all the  speaking   with bankers. Your brother in law  is good for nothing  person. He has just wasted  his life. He can not even speak for himself  or watch his family’s interests. I am sure he will say something that will spoil  Atul’s  case.You can only  convince Bankers   for this Education  loan.”

As suggested   by his sister ,  Roop  Krishen did all the talking in the Bank. Listening to this conversation, Atul’s father Bushan lal Dhar kept silent yet nodded approvingly to the commitment demonstrated by Roop  Krishen with regard to total repayment of the loan by Atul  from his future earnings. After listening  to what Roop Krishen had  said ,I handed over the list of formalities required to be completed for sanction of the loan. Roop  Krishen  received  the list and started reading the formalities.

“This is done.This is also done. All  this is done. This  is nothing , Just one hour job sir. Sir who can be the Guarantor?Father can also give the Guarantee of his son. No problem from our side”said Roop  Krishen .

“Let me make things clear. Father can not be a Guarantor. Father has to be a co borrower or Co- Obligant in this type of loan. Guarantor has to be a different person. “ I clarified.

“ No problem sir. Why you worry ? I have signed many papers as Witness in Banks. As many as 50 Savings Bank Accounts have been opened under my signatures in your Bank. If I can sign for strangers why not for our own child. We come tomorrow with complete formalities . We should be made free in two hours.” he continued .

“ No! No! It is not a witness that you are supposed to sign. It is an Agreement of Guarantee. By virtue of signing this deed , the Guarantor undertakes to bind himself for repayment of the loan and interest thereupon should there be any default from Principal Borrower. Legally the liability of a guarantor is co extensive with the principal Borrower. Things should be clear to you . Witness is nothing but seeing some document being executed. There is no pecuniary liability of a witness.The guarantor remains financially liable and tied to a loan till it is fully repaid by the principal borrower. ” I clarified .

Roop  Krishen nodded in agreement , moved his right hand fingers through his hair and rubbed his hands.I felt as if he wanted to smoke  at that moment. But then he never smoked in presence of his elder sister’s husband.  Bushan Lal Dhar and Atul looked expectantly towards Roop  Krishen.

“Sir , Why you worry ? We are there for Atul Ji. What is this 4.30 lakhs? For this boy I can sign Blank papers and give guarantee for one Crore .”Roop  Krishen added. He gave the list of formalities to Bushan lal Dhar, got up from his chair ,shook hands with me and came out of the room along with his nephew and brother in law.

Next day at about 10 AM I found Roop Krishen inside the bank premises.The moment I entered my cabin,  he   came straight to see me .This time he was alone.

“ So fast in completing the formalities. What is the last date of the admission in the college ? ” I asked.

“ What formalities sir ? Can I make some personal request ?  ”He said.

“ Sure ! What is the request.” I replied .

“ Sir  You are a great man.  Sitting on this seat , You have helped  so many people. But then you also  know all about our community. You also know Chuni Lal Pandita’s son Aditya  Pandita and his Education Loan story.They availed an Education Loan from this branch.The boy married a girl from  Maharashtra  and forgot the Education loan . Chuni Lal is now coming to your Bank every month depositing the loan instalment. Sir, Do you know that he is repaying from his pension and his tuition Income. Poor old man is doing tuitions in this age. This Bushan Lal Ji,  my brother in law  can not even do tuitions. He is still not understanding that managing a Grocery shop in Kashmir was one story and living on Government relief cheques and some bank interest in Jammu is another story. What has he for the rainy day? Just rupees 4 lakhs that he received as sale proceeds of his Natipora colony Plot.See he has to marry his daughter Sonia yet. Sonia ji I mean my niece.The family has no house. What is Mumbai MBA? I do not understand. MBA from Jammu or Punjab university is also MBA.

See every Kashmiri Pandit boy now wants to go to Pune, Mumbai or Banglore for studies. Go if you can afford. What is so great about going by putting  your family and relation  in trouble? I should not have said it but then I care for my sister. And time has also changed. ”Roop  krishen said in a non stop voice.

“There is a world of  difference in terms of Employment potential for degrees procured in Jammu and Mumbai.We are dealing with these issues through various Education Loans disbursed by the Bank.We know all this difference ” I clarified.

“Sir sixteen boys from Government College of Engineering Jammu have been  approved  by TCS and WIPRO in Campus selection   this year. It is all luck whether you study in Jammu , Pune or Overseas. Don’t misunderstand me. Atul is my son but then this Guarantee you are asking from me has turned to be the real trouble  for me.  Can this not be changed ? Ask for Guarantee of Atul’s uncle Ashok Kumar Dhar. He is a  Government Lecturer. Whenever  there  is some feast or function in the DHAR family, Ashok kumar is the chief guest and when there is any problem, they catch hold of me. Please do not misunderstand. I have highest respect and regard for my brother in law and his family. Sir, I am not that rich to become guarantor for 4.30 lacs. And if he does not pay for say 3 years , the loan amount can go upto 7 lakhs with interest application. I know all Interest calculation methods of the Bank.Even if I sell all my property, I can not clear the debt. Why You want my children to get ruined with this guarantee? I just beg you  to save me from impending misfortune.  And sir , Please , Neither Atul nor his father should know what for I came here in their absence.” Roop  Krishen continued.

“ If you are so sure about the intentions and sincerity of the boy , there is hardly any worry in being a surety for the  Education loan.” I clarified.

“Manager Sahib, I am also a father. I have two school going  children. And then if my wife comes to know about all this Guarantee  issue, there shall be a Mahabharat in my family. I have  to keep  myself  free  for  execution of any future  guarantee that my children may need. Sir, I request you to tell my brother in law that I have already given Guarantee to  some other person who has become  a defaulter and I can not give another guarantee.If you don’t  say it then I am finished. I am gone. Nobody can save me. Your words can only save this poor man.” He added.

I said nothing. Roop  Krishen sank into the chair opposite  to my table.I wanted him to leave the room as I had many other things to do. I observed that he kept looking towards the floor and the ceiling of the room and also kept biting his finger nails. I pressed the bell and sought two glasses of water. Offering one to Roop  krishen I said :

“ Shall You have tea? ”

“ My tea is only your help for this guarantee issue.  Sir , make me free  from this  tension.” he replied.

He was in no mood to leave my room.Suddenly he received a call on his mobile phone and I heard him saying:

“ Don’t  wait for me. I don’t  feel like having food today. You  do what you want to do. Leave me alone. You are only worried about   food, Nonsense !.”

At that time, Mr  Anoop  Singh  loan officer of the branch entered  my cabin  and noticing Roop Krishen , He said:

“Pandit Ji ! What happened ! Was my solution not acceptable to you? ”

Roop  Krishen looked in such a way so as to give me  an impression as if Anoop Singh  was not addressing him. I asked  Anoop  singh  how he knew Roop Krishen.

“ Sir he came to my residence yesterday and explained everything to me. I gave him a solution . Let them raise a loan of 4 Lacs only and in that event the father shall be a co-borrower and the Bank does not need a Guarantor as per  guidelines for collateral security in Education Loan Scheme.” Annop Singh  clarified and left the room taking my signatures on some papers.

“Manager Sahib  you can only  save this  poor man. As I already said,  Please tell them that  I have already given guarantee in one loan case which is now in defaulter category.Tell them that  I have no credit worthiness.Tell them anything but save me.” Added Roop  Krishen.

“ But yesterday you volunteered to be a guarantor. And then the boy is your close relation , if you also run away who else shall come to their rescue at this critical juncture. You should not panic so much.And then it is your own decision. Tell your brother in law plainly that you do not want to be a guarantor and he shall immediately find some one else suitable to the bank or decide what he has to do.”I clarified .

Roop Krishen kept silent and started reading Hindu Newspaper lying on my table.

Then to my surprise, I found  Bushan Lal Dhar , his brother in law entering the cabin  in a  great hurry with another person possibly a Kashmiri.

“Manager Sahib i have a cheque for 2.47 Lakhs in my name but the cheque is drawn on Punjab National Bank Lal Chowk, Srinagar. It  relates to  your bank only  but a different branch. This cheque has been issued by an Insurance company. This is the fire claim of my gutted house in kashmir. My sister’s husband is serving in kashmir valley on deputation. He was following up this claim case in kashmir. He  took  pains and brought the cheque today only.He came straight to my residence in Tata Sumo from Srinagar. The cheque was delivered to him only yesterday. He also knew about  Atul’s selection and  our financial   problems.  In case I get just 40 thousand within three or  four days to enable me to Pay admission fee of Atul , I need  a loan of 2 Lakhs  only.I may need the  loan next year .Sir  you  complete  our loan  file and keep the loan amount sanctioned. Sir , Bank managers are now  transferred after short  stay  and may  be you are at some other branch when we   need the money Next year. We shall be grateful if you keep the sanction note in the file  so that there is no problem  for us to avail  the amount at the time of need.Sir , God comes to rescue but man has to go through the torture also.”

“Let me see the cheque”I said. And Bushan Lal Delivered the cheque to me.  I  looked for the   Drawer’s account  in the CBS System . The cheque book serial number was in  order and it was signed by authorized signatories. The account had sufficient balance.

“No issue.You can take the entire amount of 2.47 Lakhs right now. You have to  open a Savings Bank account. Now that you need Loan of 2 Lakhs only, no guarantor is needed.”I clarified.

Roop  Krishen was listening carefully  to this  sudden development  and I could feel that my words had brought a refreshing smile on his face. Throwing  the news paper aside  and looking towards his brother in law he said :

“Namaskar ! I was just discussing the Loan case Only. Have you bought the Non Judicial stamp papers for my Guarantee ?”

And Turning to me Roop  Krishen said :

“ Now Manager Sahib please release our loan in hassle free manner.I may have to go to Jaipur for Marriage of my wife’s sister. If you desire I can sign in advance on any paper I have to sign. Atul   must get the loan.I have already given my consent to sign any paper anywhere in any capacity .”

He got up and went to Bank’s canteen room and paid the waiter  thirty rupees  ordering four  cups of tea and biscuits for all guests in the room.  Then coming close to my table he said :

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“Baa Gouss Nokraa Manager Saahb or Manager Sahib, treat me as your humble servant”

From his breath I could feel that he had smoked a cigarette in the canteen room.He then went to “ May I Help You Counter” and brought a New Account Opening Form. He now asked his brother in law to immediately go back to his residence and bring 3 photographs , photo copy of his ration card and copy of the scooter driving license . He ensured that his brother in law  leaves  immediately for  completion of formalities for opening   a  Bank account . After that,   he turned towards me and said:

“ Sir do you believe in God ?”

Now he picked up the land line telephone lying on my table and dialed some number. Once the call matured , He said to the other party :

“I am coming for the Lunch. Has Pinkoo Ji come back from his school ? We have to go to Bagh-e-Bahu Garden in the evening.I shall be bringing one  Kg of mutton for Rogan Josh and ask Pinkoo ji to collect ten special  Bread ( Ghee Roti  ) from Roshan lal ’s kashmiri Bakery shop. ”

I looked at Roop  Krishen and kept noticing the sudden change in his behaviour.

Autar Mota is a blogger and writes in English , Urdu , Kashmiri and Hindi. His write-ups have appeared in many national magazines and journals.

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